"Another phrase I use often is, “I think you have an opportunity here to…” This again phrases it as an optional change. And it’s always best to explain why you’re suggesting a change, and what effect you think it will have."
YES. I've found this to be one of the most effective methods too. Showing what the critique will theoretically result in and that this part of the writing is an opportunity rather than a problem is so important for encouraging rather than discouraging the writer.
That's the most important angle I approach editing from too: make sure the edits and comments are encouraging the writer.
"Another phrase I use often is, “I think you have an opportunity here to…” This again phrases it as an optional change. And it’s always best to explain why you’re suggesting a change, and what effect you think it will have."
YES. I've found this to be one of the most effective methods too. Showing what the critique will theoretically result in and that this part of the writing is an opportunity rather than a problem is so important for encouraging rather than discouraging the writer.
That's the most important angle I approach editing from too: make sure the edits and comments are encouraging the writer.